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From: ploopyco <54917504+ploopyco@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2019 18:34:44 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Updated 1. Introduction (markdown)

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 ## Step 1: Get the necessary tools
 **TODO PIX of all tools required**
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+These are the tools you'll need to build the Ploopy Mouse. You won't need them all immediately. This is just so you know what you're getting in for.
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 - 2.5mm Allen key or screwdriver
 - A soldering iron
 - Solder
 
 ## Step 2: Get the necessary printed circuit boards
 **TODO pix of both PCBs**
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 - Base PCB
 - Vertical PCB
 
-If you're not sure how to get these PCBs, we sell them! See [[Appendix A: Printed circuit boards]] for more information on how to buy them from us. (We also have a few tips for you, if you want to make your own!)
+If don't know how to make PCBs, **we sell them**! See [[Appendix A: Printed circuit boards]] for more information on how to buy them from us. (We also have a few tips, if you want to make your own.)
 
 ## Step 3: Get the necessary 3D-printed parts
 **TODO pix of all 3D-printed parts**
@@ -26,13 +30,14 @@ If you're not sure how to get these PCBs, we sell them! See [[Appendix A: Printe
 - 3x roller bearing dowels
 - Top
 
-If you're not sure how to get these parts, we sell them! See [[Appendix B: 3D-printed parts]] for more information on how to buy them from us. (We also have a few tips for you, if you want to make your own!)
+If you're not sure how to print your own parts, **we sell them**! See [[Appendix B: 3D-printed parts]] for more information on how to buy them from us. (We also have a few tips, if you want to make your own.)
 
 ## Step 4: Get the necessary electronics components
 **TODO pix of all electrical components**
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 **TODO electrical BOM here**
 
-Yup, you guessed it, we sell complete components kits. See [[Step 2 of Appendix A: Printed circuit boards|Appendix A: Printed circuit boards#step-2-order-the-electronics-components]] if you want more information (or info on how to buy them from your favourite electronics provider).
+Yup, you guessed it, **we sell complete components kits**. See [[Step 2 of Appendix A: Printed circuit boards|Appendix A: Printed circuit boards#step-2-order-the-electronics-components]] if you want more information (or info on how to buy them from your favourite electronics provider).
 
 ## Step 5: Get the necessary fastening hardware
 **TODO pix of all fastening hardware**
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 - 4x M3x8mm socket cap machine screw
 - 6x M3 heat-set threaded insert
 
-No surprise, we sell these too. See [[Appendix D: Hardware]] for how to buy them from us (or how to get them yourself, if you want.)
+No surprise, **we sell kits of these**. See [[Appendix D: Hardware]] for how to buy them from us (or how to get them yourself, if you want.)
 
 ## Step 6: Let's get going.
-If you're ready, proceed to [[2. Electronics Assembly]].
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+Once you've got all the stuff, proceed to [[2. Electronics Assembly]].
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